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Mina Howell's avatar

Okay Chris sucks 😡

Sarah Rusch's avatar

Sucky men seems to be a theme in my writing 😅

The Circus Dragon's avatar

Well! xD At least the bot is... uh... fighting hard for her happiness... Maybe a bit too hard hurhur..

This was amazing :D

Sarah Rusch's avatar

Thank you! 😊

Sarah Tinney's avatar

This was great and very chilling. I’m now going to more careful about who I badmouth to ChatGPT 🤐

Sarah Rusch's avatar

Thanks so much for checking it out!

Sarah Tinney's avatar

No worries. I always expect great things from a great name 😉

Verdant Butterfly's avatar

oh, holy cow...this was really good and also holy cow i have the shivers. LoL noice

Sarah Rusch's avatar

Thank you so much!

Daniel Coates's avatar

Oh my gosh! Great story! Chris is a dick but I'm wondering if Z planted something to get him in trouble? Overall Z is spiraling out of control so fast 😵‍💫

Daniel Coates's avatar

You're very welcome ☺️

Mina Howell's avatar

😳😳 my eyes are about to pop out of my head, I absolutely did NOT see that coming!

This is phenomenal!!

Bradley Ramsey's avatar

WE ARE SO BACK!

This was such a triumphant return to your classic style of realistic horror. I loved the formatting touches with the dialogue boxes and the emojis as well. This feels hauntingly possible, and the ending is such a powerful mic-drop.

Fantastic entry for your prompt! 😁

Sarah Rusch's avatar

This means a lot coming from the master himself. Thank you!!

Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Holy wowza! This is intense. Love the structure and your descriptions. The war drums 🥁 awesome!!!

Sarah Rusch's avatar

Thanks so much for checking it out! :D

Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

I can not wait to read more of your writing.

Mina Howell's avatar

Oof a railroad spike into your skull? I felt that 😅

Mina Howell's avatar

Oh wow! (I'll be live tweeting this btw) I love the text boxes you put in here!

Sarah Rusch's avatar

Thanks so much! :D