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Overthinkery's avatar

Wow! Just... wow 🥰

Sarah Rusch's avatar

Thanks for reading!

Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Oh my word. This is painful. And reminds me a bit of Upload. You die first & you are uploaded into Eden like village. You write so wonderfully. This is very very good.

Sarah Rusch's avatar

Thanks so much, Maryellen! ♥

Verdant Butterfly's avatar

Wonderful flow, and the details were just enough to create a clear image of the hell he was in. great story. sad ending. 😭✨🦋

Sarah Rusch's avatar

Thanks for reading!

Mina Howell's avatar

Jeeeez you really knocked this one out of the park! Seriously phenomenal work!

Also I'm sorry for live tweeting it 😂

Sarah Rusch's avatar

Thank you so much! 🥹

Mina Howell's avatar

Oh man! Howell?! 😲

Sarah Rusch's avatar

Lmao, I didn't even realize 🤣

Mina Howell's avatar

Wow, the way this devolves is truly terrifying 🥺

You portrayed it so well!

Mina Howell's avatar

Your writing voice is 👌👌

Seriously just so strong, I love it 🥰